In the manner of most current comics, these first three pages comprise only a page-and-a-half of dialog and action, IMHO. But leaving that aside, give these a good look:
Not bad, right? I agree. But look again and see what you might do to...
- Make situations and actions clearer...
- Keep the two characters from being confused with one another...
- And to bring more logic to how they move?
Please comment here! I'll post my take on these in the next couple days.
See You Saturday at STEVENS BOOKS,
John
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